Go Aragorn! Estel, indeed! I am so glad he never gave up his search and was rewarded in the end. You do an excellent job of portraying his doubts and fears and thoughts as he searches, coming right up to the edge of hope, but never losing it completely. Excellent use of Bregod, too! I also have thoroughly enjoyed your Gimli - he has become a strong piece of this friendship in such a short time, and I am so pleased to see him and his grumpy self laying claim to both the Elf and Man as friends. Great stuff...I am off the chapter 3! Linda (he is only unconscious, isn't he? *hopeful look...still sniffing*)
Author's Response: In this case it was really good that Aragorn is so stubborn. I'm glad you liked the way I described his feelings and thoughts, I really did not give him an easy time. ;-) I enjoyed writing Brego and Gimli. I loved how you expressed that: "his grumpy self laying claim to both the Elf and Man as friends". That's perfectl, just the way I see him in this story (and elsewhere). Thank you so much for another review, I'm always glad when people fear for my characters! Hehe. Tinu :) | 