babschwi04/23/13 09:58 am9: The Burning KingAnonymous

very good written !

'This king of theirs seems to have a lot of names.'  lol

Poor Hakim, seeing his friend chained and unable to comfort or help. No wonder he thought he was crying.

And so very true of Aragorn to spend comfort even in a miserable position.

Hope you update soon, can hardly wait to read further...



Author's Response:

Thank you for the wonderful review!  Ha, I can't seem to stop myself from commenting on his overabundance of names!  And Hakim doesn't know the half of it . . .

 

-Brennan


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