Women! That was just typical... however perfect they are or however much their husbands love them, they always fret about their looks. It must be a genetic thing. I had thought that maybe elves were immune, but apparently I was wrong:)
Especially in the first chapter I had a definite "Eastern Promises" dejà-vu. And that's always a good thing!
Author's Response: Many thanks for your much appreciated review. It seems,alas that even Elves can fret over their looks!I'm pleased the first chapter made you think of "Eastern Promises" | 