Hi, I'm very glad that you're writing again. For my taste this chapter is too fluffy, but I like your Aragorn and the way you describe his 'hurts'. Wishing for a little bit more 'angst' and feeling almost sorry because I'm going on a holiday for 14 days and won't be able to read more but I will be back as soon as I am home again! CU
Author's Response: Hi, Babschwi... sorry this was too light for your tastes. I do try to write a mix of things, from darker stories to ones that have a lighter tone--this one falls somewhere in the middle of that. I hope when you read the next two chapters you come away satisfied. Enjoy your holiday, and thanks for letting me know your thoughts. | 