Indeed, how to be a King after someone like Aragorn? You portray Eldarion very well. And the very thing that he thinks of all this shows that he is not conceited, but wise. I like the detail when you say that Eldarion is surprised to see his sister and mother curtsy.
Well done! ;)
Author's Response: Dear Ellynn: Thank you for such a detailed review! I'm especially glad you told me what exactly you liked about it. Indeed, Eldarion was surprised when his female relatives curtsied, because as the story indicated, he was accustomed to thinking of his father as the King. I appreciate your taking the time to read and review, especially since the review is positive! Thanks again. Sincerely, Darkover |
