Beautiful written - nice story - I like your shy little estel very much - all of your characters are nice designed - I hope you will write more !!!!
Thank you very much! I wanted to capture the shock that the violent loss of his father and those he was familiar with, and give a little different twist to some of the characters. I am very glad you enjoyed it!
I hope to write more too, but I am waiting for my muse...
An O Eru!